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PostPosted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:17 pm 
The Key of Destiny
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Location: The Dark Abyss
Favorite Organization XIII Member: Roxas
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Prologue

“Death is maybe the only way out. It seems that wishful thoughts of a bright and wonderful future were just a far away fantasy. Sinister and ruthless was my judgement, torturous was my punishment. I will always remember the day as I stood before the “so-called” almighty courtroom with the insignificant and corrupted board of adjudicators, tied tightly with magical stings of fate, as they shouted word after word in debate on whether am I guilty or not.

In Truth, I actually don’t really know who I’m anymore. Maybe I’m just a person who is cast vicariously as both victim and villain by the vicissitudes of divine intervention. Blast these infernal, venal and virulent vermin that stands before my path to everlasting happiness! The only reminiscence I recall was you and a young lady being stabbed as she tried to save me from utter annihilation from these van-guarding, vice and vouchsafing people who claim themselves as the deliverer of God’s Judgement!

Curse you all! I shall escape from this wretched prison! The only verdict for you vermin’s is vengeance! A vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such, shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous inhabitants of this world! My brother, please be safe, once I’m gone, I do hope you grow up to be a fine gentlemen. I shall return with infinite authority and power to save both you and the others from these pitiable and counterfeit people who call themselves God’s left hand! Be well my brother and goodbye...”

Kaoru

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I need a name of the story.. please suggest some.. thanks..

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Tsumi no saigo wa namida ja nai yo
Zutto kurushiku seottekunda
Deguchi mienai kanjoumeiro ni
Dare wo matteruno
Shiroi nooto ni tsuzutta youni
Motto sunao ni hakidashitai yo
Nani kara nogaretainda
Genjitsu tte yatsu


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 Post subject: Re: Story that has no subject
PostPosted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 1:45 pm 
Dusk
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Location: The Roof
There's a lot of big big words in there, but I like it!

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Now when you pick a pawpaw
Or a prickly pear
And you prick a raw paw
Next time beware
Don't pick the prickly pear by the paw
When you pick a pear
Try to use the claw
But you don't need to use the claw
When you pick a pear of the big pawpaw
Have I given you a clue ?


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